renegade reflection

Every time you took a swing, I bore it and looked away.

Again and again, you hit and I felt your tiny punches slowly eat away at my skin.

The venom that they held seeped in somehow. And the more you hit, the more I began to hit back. Slowly we became each other. You non-chalant, indifferent. Me vulnerable, fragile. Until you thought you would give me a taste of my own medicine and gave me poison instead.

I sucked it in, and licked my lips and thanked god for your flesh.
Couldn't keep my eyes open long enough to see the sneers behind your smiles.

Comments

discopapaya said…
why do i feel so empty all of a sudden?
Rude Awakenings said…
The viciousness involved in love, isn't it pain stakingly fasinating?
Love is a poison I'm willing to indulge in.
You did it again Sajjad.

Sonia
SR said…
it's amazing how people can relate to so much of what you have to say.. and im one of them. for some reason, reading that post brought back alot of memories-not good ones- but the happiness i felt after walking out of the situation.. amazing post once again.. =)
BaptizedLucifer said…
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discopapaya said…
luci, you are god.

bus enough i officially worship u.
Rude Awakenings said…
Heya!

The faithful follower is here, hes not the one who sucks!!!
And am sure you all will suck sum time in your life. hahaha Giv it time!!! :p

p.s all said in a mild fun manner.

Sonia
Ozair said…
:D sajjad how is the vampire story coming along?! for a second i thought this was about that "coz i cought a glimpse of the word "suck" and was like... hmmm must be vampires... turns out it was u...! :D nonetheless sonia says puts it right about love being a poison... and u put them adequately in words... :)
Phitaymaun said…
dp: Hadn't eaten yet perhaps?

Sonia: :D You rock lady. Praise even prettier than what is being praised. YOU did it again!

Shaima: Glad you could relate although didn't seems like you empathize. Which is okay really, as long as you come here and find yourself provoked.

Luci: Sigh. Welcome back to me blog.

DP: Sigh. You defected. Fine. So be it.

Sonia: You got my back huh :D

Ozzy: It ain't man... i wrote like one page and decided its better left to Anne Rice. Might revisit it later to see if i can do anything with it, in teh meanwhile how about another witchy vampire babe to get teh creative juices flowing again?
discopapaya said…
bus naa on the real day i wont wish you ive gotten it wrong wayyy too many times already
"slowly we became each other.."

so true
just muttering said…
ver dark very real ...i like:P

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